2008年12月17日水曜日

Portfolios

Student ID:07140


Portfolio
for Writing IV,
Section 1a


(See: Note 1, below)


0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)


1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates
yy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)
Website Review: I Love Starbucks Coffee

Website Review: I LOVE STARBUCKS

2008.9.28



2008.10.05
7



7
393



588
7



0
2



2
7



9
0



0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)

My Home

2008.10.19
5
512
0
0
1
0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)

"Mrs Doubtfire"

2008.11.03
5
511
5
0
1
0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)

A Part of My Life~Community Life~

2008.11.17
7
522
0
0
1
0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)
Other Place!~Secret of Kumamoto~

2008.12.01
5
298
0
1
0
0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)
Learning With Computer

2008.12.12
6
514
0
0
0
0


















Totals---
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42
3338
12
5
19
0


Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • My best assay is I LOVE STARBUCKS for website review. It is rewrite of website review and there are two reasons. First, I wrote details of Starbucks and my opinions and thoughts. Second, I used many pictures and two links in the essay.

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*



2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
MR: Mrs Doubt

11.04.08

37

She could write her opinion well.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

Essay 2-03: "Mrs Doubtfire"
11.03.08
87She gave me good advice and, I can write essay.
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yy.mm.dd Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
With My Boyfriend
12.05.08
34She told me new information.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.


2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

  • ... Yes. It is sidebar and I can check it there.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
  • ....


3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Maisie and The Dolphin08.0930

134
0
2-02
Marcel and The White Star08.10.14
135
0
2-03
FLYING HOME
08.10.14

118
0
2-04
Lucky Break
08.11.05

131

0
2-05
Billy and the Queen
08.11.14

131

0
2-06
Stuart LIttle
09.01.08
125
0
2-07
WAKE UP, SUN!09.01.08
145
0
2-08
ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM


09.01.08


94
0
2-09
AUTHUR and the NEW KID
09.01.08
107

0
2-10
ARTHUT and the SCHOOL PET
09.01.08
128

0
2-11




2-12




2-13



2-14



2-15



2-16



2-17



2-18






































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Totals:




Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).



3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]


4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media



Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?

O


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
O

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
O

4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

O

4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
O

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
O

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
O

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
O

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

O
  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
O

  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")

O

4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
O

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?
O

  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
O

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
    • ___ posts including photos or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
O
  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?
    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

O
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference.
    1. ... (short link, date)
    2. ... (short link, date)
    3. ... (short link, date)

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

  1. ...I attached a lot of pictures on posts and easy to watch them and imagine.
  2. ...I sometimes changed font size and emphasized the important words.
  3. ...I put the recent comments lists and slidbar.


5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

  • I could type faster than before.
  • I could know how to attach pictures and communicate other people and know their thought.
  • However, it was very tough to finish essay to due.

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

  • ...Attach a lot of links and media and more pictures on every posts.
  • ...Make originally blog such as color, view and slidebar to attract visiter.
  • ...Write clearly and your own opinion.

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Notes:

  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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2 件のコメント:

mii さんのコメント...

Hi, coco. I'm Mio. I saw your portfolio. you need more book reviews, so you should do it, I think. On the other hand, you wrote essays, and got many comments. I is good point of your essay!!

Emily さんのコメント...

Well done your blog, COCO!!

Acording to your writing in 5.0;Additional reflection, I really think you flequently pasted many pictures on each posys. In the result, your blog got better on the whole.

But it's a pity that you remain your book review's showcase empty. I want you to write it as much as you can.