I will nominate this essay "MR 2-01: Mrs. Doubtfire" in c class. This is two reasons for it. The first, it is a very easy to read this essay. The essay is long but it is not boring for me and I can read the end. The second reason is that she could write her thoughts well. I read other student's essay and I thought that there were a lot of people who wrote summaries. So I lost interest in halfway.
Therefore; I nominated her essay!
Link→http://saori-nitta.blogspot.com/2008/11/mr-2-01-mrs-doubtfire.html
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2008年11月19日水曜日
2008年11月17日月曜日
Essay 2-04: A Part of My Life~Community Life~
When I was a junior high school student, I belonged to badminton club. I have liked to play badminton when I was a child, so I often used to play it with my family and friends in the park or house. I was very interested in badminton and I wanted to belong to it. It is a start that I play badminton and became a necessary part of my life. 
I belonged to badminton club, however, I had thought that badminton was very easy sport. I went to see the activity after school, but it was so speedy movement that I and my childhood friend were overwhelmed. However, our determinations were not unshaken. After all, four girls except us belonged to badminton club.
The practices were very very hard because our couch was a champion when he was a high school student. He was a strict and he made us train up very harder. Before hitting the shuttle, we had to train to improve physical strength inside and outside. I didn't like that. We trained everyday while we were short of breath and sweat profusely. Although I didn't like that, I could realize that my strength and skill were improving gradually. I stood their severe training and tried to practice badminton, so I won the doubles in third palace at the 中体連 in Kikuchi District. It was unbelievable and I was very overjoyed then.
I wanted to belong and try another club in high school. However, I belonged to badminton club again after all because I want to do nothing else. The training was not harder than in junior high school because we had to place study than club. So I learned many things except practicing badminton.
We had to be consistent with club and study, but I want to be good at badminton. I practiced hard but I could not become good player easily, so I was worried many times and I overcame my suffering and my friends helped me once in a while. Because we had many own thoughts, we clashed each other and were distressed many times. Whenever we were, we talked and overcame many times. We spent so that three years, so we built good relationship each other and became good friends. Of course, our badminton skill could improve up. I am very happy that I could meet and spend with them high school days.
Now I have contained to play badminton. I belonged to badminton club in spring, and when I was free, I play it with other university students. Besides, I go trip, drinking, play with them. I still enjoy badminton life now. When I play badminton, I can get rid of my stress.
As a conclusion, it is a part of my life for me to join and play badminton. Through badminton, I could meet many people and had to do with them. To play badminton isn't easy but it has been a necessity to do. I could not feel happiness, enjoyment and fruition, but also affliction, sadness and setback. It is important to feel them and I could grow with people together.
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I belonged to badminton club, however, I had thought that badminton was very easy sport. I went to see the activity after school, but it was so speedy movement that I and my childhood friend were overwhelmed. However, our determinations were not unshaken. After all, four girls except us belonged to badminton club.
The practices were very very hard because our couch was a champion when he was a high school student. He was a strict and he made us train up very harder. Before hitting the shuttle, we had to train to improve physical strength inside and outside. I didn't like that. We trained everyday while we were short of breath and sweat profusely. Although I didn't like that, I could realize that my strength and skill were improving gradually. I stood their severe training and tried to practice badminton, so I won the doubles in third palace at the 中体連 in Kikuchi District. It was unbelievable and I was very overjoyed then.
I wanted to belong and try another club in high school. However, I belonged to badminton club again after all because I want to do nothing else. The training was not harder than in junior high school because we had to place study than club. So I learned many things except practicing badminton.
We had to be consistent with club and study, but I want to be good at badminton. I practiced hard but I could not become good player easily, so I was worried many times and I overcame my suffering and my friends helped me once in a while. Because we had many own thoughts, we clashed each other and were distressed many times. Whenever we were, we talked and overcame many times. We spent so that three years, so we built good relationship each other and became good friends. Of course, our badminton skill could improve up. I am very happy that I could meet and spend with them high school days.
Now I have contained to play badminton. I belonged to badminton club in spring, and when I was free, I play it with other university students. Besides, I go trip, drinking, play with them. I still enjoy badminton life now. When I play badminton, I can get rid of my stress.
As a conclusion, it is a part of my life for me to join and play badminton. Through badminton, I could meet many people and had to do with them. To play badminton isn't easy but it has been a necessity to do. I could not feel happiness, enjoyment and fruition, but also affliction, sadness and setback. It is important to feel them and I could grow with people together.
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2008年11月14日金曜日
BR 2-05:Billy and the Queen
I read "Billy and the Queen." It cover attracted me. The story is that Billy wants new bicycle. Then his grandma told him how to get new bicycle. It is to send their photo of him and the Queen together. If he get first prize, he can get F 500 and he can buy two new bikes. So he and his sister went to take pictures, but they could not do well for many days. One day he had a good idea. They went Madame Tussuad's. There were a lot of people and he found the Queen!! He took her together and sends it. Of course, he got first prize and got two new bicycles. He is a crafty but so nice! They all became happy. I like one of them.
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2008年11月12日水曜日
Free-write
I had belonged to badminton club for six years. I entered junior high school and also belong to badminton club because I had thought that I wanted to belong there. I like to play badminton, so when I was a child, I went to the park and played badminton with my family and friends. I had thought that badminton was easy and interesting but it was not true. It was very hard and serious.
Badminton is very important and precious for me. I could grow in my life. I could many people and learned many things. If I didn't do that, my life could not become tired. Badminton is one of the most irreplaceable things.
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Badminton is very important and precious for me. I could grow in my life. I could many people and learned many things. If I didn't do that, my life could not become tired. Badminton is one of the most irreplaceable things.
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Brainstorm
I belonged to Badminton club in junior high school and high school.
badminton
friends
racket
shuttle
games
matches
court
severe
hard
enjoy
be impressed
achievement
endurance
target
coach
opponents
comrade
single
double
meeting
sweat
tear
uniform
badminton
friends
racket
shuttle
games
matches
court
severe
hard
enjoy
be impressed
achievement
endurance
target
coach
opponents
comrade
single
double
meeting
sweat
tear
uniform
Watching Stars!?
We three, I and my friends, went Aso to watch stars. Last year I and other friends went there for driving and we could many many beautiful stars in the sky. So I also went there in this year.
First we went to eat dinner. I went there for the first time and I wanted to there because I have heard that there ramens were very delicious. We ordered こく味 and とろけるぷりん. This ramen was rich dish and this pudding is very soft and didn't look like a pudding.
Then we went Aso for my driving right away. We drove about 40 minutes and arrived at 大観峰 while watching my big map. We were looking forward to watching stars but we couldn't watch them!! The sky were clear and there was a moon top of our heads. The moon was so shining that there were not many stars. It was very very coooooooold!!! We couldn't stay there long time without wearing many clothes. We stayed about 30 minutes and made merry. If we come to Aso at night again, we really want to watch stars!!
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First we went to eat dinner. I went there for the first time and I wanted to there because I have heard that there ramens were very delicious. We ordered こく味 and とろけるぷりん. This ramen was rich dish and this pudding is very soft and didn't look like a pudding.
Then we went Aso for my driving right away. We drove about 40 minutes and arrived at 大観峰 while watching my big map. We were looking forward to watching stars but we couldn't watch them!! The sky were clear and there was a moon top of our heads. The moon was so shining that there were not many stars. It was very very coooooooold!!! We couldn't stay there long time without wearing many clothes. We stayed about 30 minutes and made merry. If we come to Aso at night again, we really want to watch stars!!
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2008年11月5日水曜日
BR 2-04: Lucky Break
I read this book Lucky Break. Tom belongs to football club but broke his leg, so he had to use crutch. He has a favorite movie star, and she will come to movie
theater, so he went see her. There were many crowed people and he was pushed by someone. Then his crutch hit movie star and she was angry with him. They were took pictures and he was famous, too. Next day he went to see football games and there people talked about him. Then he had a good idea and he sold his clothes as a auction. They were sold for high price!
He was very unlucky person because of the breaking leg. Unhappiness things happened for him, but it was occurred for him a happy thing at last.
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theater, so he went see her. There were many crowed people and he was pushed by someone. Then his crutch hit movie star and she was angry with him. They were took pictures and he was famous, too. Next day he went to see football games and there people talked about him. Then he had a good idea and he sold his clothes as a auction. They were sold for high price!
He was very unlucky person because of the breaking leg. Unhappiness things happened for him, but it was occurred for him a happy thing at last.
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