Favorite Place: Outline

Outline

Introduction

• Where my favorite place is
  
• Why I like it (brief)
  

Body

• Good point
• What I like to do
• Why I like it (First, Second, and Third)
  

Conclusion

(34 words)

BR 2-02: Marcel and The White Star

I read Marcel and The White Star. The story is that the French mouth takes back the big diamond for opera star. Marcel is a French house and he lives on a beautiful old boat, under the kitchen floor, in Paris. He likes the opera and one night he went to have dinner with his friends. After dinner, Marcel waited at the station and heard that two men were talking about stealing opera star's beautiful one million pound diamond ring. Then two men stole her diamond and Marcel took back her diamond in good condition.

He is smart, gentle and has a strong sense of justice. So both he and the opera star became happy. I don't mice but I like him. I want mice as the little star to be in the world.

(135 words)

Grandma

I went to see my grandma in hospital near my house for the first time. She collapsed from cerebral accident the last of the July. When I was coming back home, I watched ambulance passing. Just then I thought nothing but when I went back home, my family bustled around and they told me that my grandma collapsed. I was very shocked.
She had entered national hospital till September eighteenth, but she moved to near hospital next day. It takes about 10 minutes by car but I have never been to see her. I had always said that I had a part time job, but I should have gone there soon.
It had been a long time since I saw my grandma. She has slept for a long time. She has never opened her eyes and talked at all. She has taken a respirator. No sooner had I watched her than I felt very very sad and I was easy to shed tears. I called her name and massaged her hard hands. I gulped down my tears many times.I thought that I should have made her much of.
I wish she was in good spirits. I will go to see her again.

(203 words)

Brainstorm

Brainstorm

relax
eat
drink
interior
fashionable
quiet
music
comfortable
several people
alone
quiet
foods
drink
furniture
TV

(17 words)

My Favorite Place

My favorite place is my house. I like to go shopping, watch movies, dinner and play with my friends, so I think that I like to spend my outside. However, I like my home because wherever I go, I can relax best. Also, there are many things at home, so I can do what I want to. If I am hungry, I can eat anything I like at any time. If I am sleepy, I can sleep everywhere. If I came to watch TV, I can watch favorite programs. In other words, whenever I want to do, whatever I can do. So I like my home best.
(107 words)

My favorite fall activity

My favorite fall activity is shopping. I like to go shopping with my friends or alone. I usually go shopping alone because it is carefree for me to go shopping. Whenever I go, anywhere I go.
I like to watch people in university, shops, streets, magazines, and TV. If I found fashionable people, or favorite clothes, I go to several shops one after another and I find the best and buy it. I have much time to find favorites.
It came fall but I don't have many clothes, so I have trouble choosing clothes everyday! I want to buy many clothes as soon as possible!!
(105 words)

A French

I have a class of French every Monday. There are nine people in the class and we usually study Jeanne D'arc, but today we took a test of French. It was 仏検　５級. I didn't know such an official approval, so I took for the first time. Our teacher said that we can pass the test because we had already learned. However, I had not studied at all, so I didn't know so much. I solved the questions at once and slept because I was very very sleepy. It was not so bad the result, but French is difficult, I thought.
(105 words)