Protfolio for Writing 3

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Student ID: vwxyz
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words)	I'm a Japanese girl!	2008/04/09	8	469	1	0	0	0
Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words)	SHReK!!	2008/05/02	10	482	0	0	1	0
University life 08.05.18	My University Life	2008/05/17	7	601	1	0	1	0
Another review 08.06.01	Bridget Jonse	2008/05/30	7	579	0	0	2	0
Language learning history 08.06.15	My Language Learning History	2008/06/14	7	535	0	0	0	0
5th essay Slideshow	Self Introduction	२००८/०७/06	0	0	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best essay is My University Life. I like my university life because I like to spend with friends at KGU and I enjoy everyday. I prefer spending at KGU to spending at home. Also, university life is center of my life now.
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ...
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
1-01	Book review	08.04.15	270	0
1-02	Another World	08.04.30	267	1
1-03	Some Stories	08.05.10	468	0
1-04	Audrey Hepburn	08.05.19	182	0
1-05	Aladdin	08.05.24	156	0
1-06	The Clumsy Crocodile	08.06.19	152	0
1-07	The Bully	08.06.22	148	0
1-08	The Motorway	08.06.28	82	0
1-09	Chinese Adventure	08.06.29	136	0
1-10	The Broken Roof	08.06.30	58	0
1-11	The Gingerbread Boy	08.07.02	93	0
1-12	Clever Girl	08.07.03	67	0
१-13	Stew	०८.07.05	77	0
---	---	TOTALS:

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?	0
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?		0
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?		0
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?		0
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		0
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		0
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)		0
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...
2. ...
3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
   

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Best Blog

I visited other writing class and I found a blog which I like best.
The blog is very cute and it looks very happy. It is also easy to read. Nozomi wrote the Blog and she celebrated her birthday by her boyfriend and her friends. She was presented a watch and cakes. She went to a bar and spent very enjoyable time with her boyfriend. It is glad to spend with boyfriend or friends. Happy Birthday to you!!
If you are interested in the blog, please look it.

My Birthday!!

(90 words)

The Bully

I read "The Bully." One day a new girl came to the school. The new girl was called Rosie, and she didn't look very friendly. She was bully and she was nasty to her classmates. Nobody likes her. She asked secret of the magic key to Chip. He didn't want to tell about the magic key, but he told. Then she made Chip take her home. When she was holding the magic key, it wouldn't glow. But, Chip took the key, it began to glow. The key took the children on a new adventure. It was a school playground. The magic key changed her into the figure that she said nasty. She didn't like this and understood that it was the wrong what she did.

It was the short story but it was written very importance in it. The magic key told how to teach Rosie a lesson.

(148 words)

Happy Birthday To My Friend

Tomorrow is my friend's birthday. I and my friends, we were four, went to the restaurant after eight and ate many foods and cocktails. Then we present the ring. She was very glad about it. Two were got out the restrautant and bought a cake in seacret and we joined at the game center. We played and went to a internet cafe. We sang songs at the karaoke and celebrated her at 12 sharp. We gave another present and sent happy birthday mail. She was very surprised and cried with pleasure. We were also pleased. We ate chocolete cake and talked deeply many times. AlsoWe were best friends!

(109 words)

The Clumsy Crocodile

I read "The Clumsy Crocodile" because the cover was so cute.

Cassy Green was a Crocodile and it was the very first day of her new job. She works at Everglades, the biggest and best store in town. She was sent some department, but she made many blunder everywhere. So, her boss gave a last chance and she had to do her best. The next day was Sunday, so she got ready for Monday. Finally, she did and looked perfect!

On Monday morning, two thieves went to the store to rub the most expensive emerald, but Cassy caught them and she was given a medal. It was the proudest moment of her life. She was a hero and she became Everglades' Chief Taster and Tester.

She would try her best but she blundered many times. She never gave up, so she succeeded at last. It is important for us to never give up.

(152 words)

Preperation

After the classes, I and my friend went to downtown to buy birthday present for my friend and to search some shops. At first, we were looking for the present and bought a ring with ribbon. It was gold and becomes her, we thought. We were tired gradually, so we went to the STARBUCKS and took a rest. There was a new drink menu, so we tried it. It was a bitter chocolate mocha. It was delicious and we felt better. We liked it.
Then we went shopping because we wanted to buy some clothes. We found pretty clothes at the same building, so we bought T-shirt each other there. It is good for us to go shopping.

(118 words)

Wedding Ceremony

I hold a mock wedding ceremony in a wedding hall for ceremonies. In last week, a member of Photograph, my acquaintance, spoke to me because he would be model of a bridegroom, and he was searching for a part of his bride. So I came to be his bride.
At first, I changed into wedding dress at the hall and I had the makeup artists put on makeup. They were professional, so their skill was very wonderful! My face sparkled with lame. My eyes were very colorful like a swallowtail. It was pink, blue, yellowish green and white. It was very beautiful.
Second, I and my bridegroom did a rehearsal at the church. We walked aisle and did pray, swear, put on a ring and kiss. We were very very nervous at the rehearsal and perform. Some lovers came to see us and saw our ceremony. I was failure a little but I experienced good time.

(155 words)